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These are the four pages I was stuck on forever with. Uge...only because...no matter what I do...Karin always will sounds completely harsh....for the sake of Sasuke-kunnnn. X.x *mumbles*

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Coupling
Couples: SasuSaku, NaruSaku, NaruHina, SaiNaru,SasuKarin,-------,--------,SasuNaru,-------. (<-it's like RPG, we just have to wait to unlock them) How they are unlock is when one of the characters are seriously in love with the other.

Warning:
This comic contains Blood, Adult Themes (R16), Swearing, Shounen-ai (Boy Love), Shoujo-ai (Girl Love) and Het (Straight).
This doujinshi will also contain things that the reader might not like, or disagree with later in the story. Things that will make people hate me for later -- and I don't really care if they do. It has to be done!
If this doujinshi doesn't hold your princess fancy, please don't leave a comment. Just leave. Thank you.

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:iconkuramafire:
Kuramafire Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2018
Karin isn't necessarily the best person, but she's not wrong.
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:iconrikuuzumaki7:
RikuUzumaki7 Featured By Owner May 29, 2015
While Karin does have my sympathies for having her feelings hurt, she went too far with that insult.
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:iconkaitlynlovehearts:
KaitlynLoveHearts Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2014  Student Interface Designer
your not really naruto friend so he dont give a fuck
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:iconkingkong30:
kingkong30 Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2014
Stop talking trash on naruhina Karin
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:iconstacy-chan4eva:
Stacy-chan4Eva Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
noooooooo naruhina 4 eva!!!!!!!!!!!!! Waaaah! 
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:iconkuramafire:
Kuramafire Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2017
I may not like Karin all the time, but I agree with her about that last part. Wake up, Naruto!
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:iconkaitlynlovehearts:
KaitlynLoveHearts Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2014  Student Interface Designer
i give you one second to run you worthless piece of crap Karin

:minigun: Shock Emote 
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:iconstacy-chan4eva:
Stacy-chan4Eva Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Yea!!!!!
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:iconhamanisanomosaki:
HamanisaNomosaki Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Are you still accepting constructive help with wording?  :) 
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:iconhamanisanomosaki:
HamanisaNomosaki Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Or spelling?
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:iconenock:
Enock Featured By Owner Edited Sep 26, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
At the moment no, I still have my one friend I can email to him the pages. But this comic is still in constriction itself. X.x I keep changing the writing around most of the time. But if he doesn't want to edited the pages anymore, or he's too busy to do them. Then I'll give a shout to you. ^.^ ~:heart:
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:iconhamanisanomosaki:
HamanisaNomosaki Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Alright, thank you! It's an honor to be considered. I was out of internet for a while and read all 4 chapters I had over and over, lol. I think I got you a few more people who like your stuff, too. I always recommend it to everyone! Keep up the good work! :D
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:icontwelldawg:
twelldawg Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2014
I think that at some point in this fight their family connection should have been at least mentioned. Might have made this a little more personal.
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:iconalexachan80:
alexachan80 Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2014
good karin, someone needs to tell naruto the true  and slap the very true n her fece 
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:iconyori-sama-1983:
Yori-sama-1983 Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2014
FUCK YOU KARIN-SLUT!
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:icontonijoseph:
tonijoseph Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2014
Daaaaammmmnnn!!! dem words doe ,not nice. Hinata's totally gonna get hurt as much as I don't want that to happen .She doesn't deserve to be with someone who doesn't love her or is unsure.
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YukitoUchiha Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2014
Karin is being a bit too harsh on Naruto but can anyone blame her?
She's completely true about Sasuke and Sakura. I'm really irritated at both of them for acting that way... It makes them horrible friends.
And Karin has every right to be angry. Anyone would be if the one you love gets together with someone else by a efforts of third party and your feelings are completely thrown away.....
And about the Hinata thing. Karin is being harsh but somewhat true. And the whole NaruHina relationship right now doesn't seem right to me. Again this is just my opinion
Awesome page as always Enock^.^ This was troubling you but it came out amazing!! Little grammitical errors but they are hardly noticeable:)
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:iconchaosomega88:
ChaosOmega88 Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2014
you are right Naruto tries to make EVERYONE happy but that is impossible in that condition (man this conversation getting harsh every page)
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:iconyukitouchiha:
YukitoUchiha Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2014
Yeah not 'Everyone' will be happy by the decisions you make. In the end someone is gonna end up with a broken heart.
Yes it is... Karin is trying Naruto's patience.
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Draceer Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2014  Student General Artist
Sure she's being blunt and you can call that harsh, but can anyone really say she's wrong?
No? She's hurting emotionally and lashing out...lashing out at the military dictator is as idiotic as can be, but besides that blatant foolishness, it's understandable.

Not being politically-correct or emotionally-oversensitive isn't a crime.
Sometimes you just need a slap in the face. ((And Naruto needs one to get off her butt, stop being miserable, and fight for Sasuke!))

To the Hinata fans? Sorry, but she has a point. The girl WAS nothing more than a stalker, and giving in just because someone obsesses over you...well, that's a joke. And a shame.
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YukitoUchiha Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2014
I agree. Are you by any chance supporting SasuNaru in this comic?
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:icondraceer:
Draceer Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2014  Student General Artist
A'yup.
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YukitoUchiha Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2014
Cool ;)
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:iconchaosomega88:
ChaosOmega88 Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2014
it was already in look at the description
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:iconyukitouchiha:
YukitoUchiha Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2014
Yeah I know I was just asking him/her... :)
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nightwolfx13 Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2014
Ok the rest is true, Naruto being miserable cause his best friends have basically ditched him, and him sort of ignoring Karins feelings in the whole matter but calling his relationship with Hinata a joke and calling her a stalker is too much. I do believe that Naruto cares about Hinata a shit load and does like her that way, but his feelings for Sakura are getting in the way of being completely in love with Hinata. Again I really hope that you dont hurt Hinata in your story by having Naruto leave her, she truly loves him with all her heart, however its your story and I have no right asking you to do something thats against what you want to do.
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Vampirechibi-chan Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Although harsh, Karin does have a point. Sasuke and Sakura have pretty much abandoned Naruto with his challenge of adjusting to his new body and chakra limit for each other ever since they started dating. Karin has every right to be angry or pissed off at Naruto for that, because we all know that Karin likes Sasuke and some point Naruto probably knew as well. So Naruto can't really make the excuse 'I didn't know,' for that. Now as a NaruHina fan, what she said about their relationship was a pushing it a bit too much on my part. Overall, Karin is just acting like any other person in the world who has lost the person they like to someone else, and I know that some people have gone threw the same thing Karin is going thorough right now.
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:iconpairho:
PaiRho Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2014
Make's for a nice drama, but not much of a military command..  Some ones queuing up for a beatdown. 
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:iconlawman09:
Lawman09 Featured By Owner Edited Sep 19, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Okay, girl. You need a real slapping. Out of everyone here, you need to get over your crush the most.

You're bad-mouthing Naruto, you're putting down Sakura, and you're name-calling Hinata. You're the one who doesn't care about other's wants and needs.

If anything, you're throwing Sakura to Naruto as leftovers.
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overlordofnobodies Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2014
That is my girl!:w00t:
Naruto will finally learn simple because some poepl are happy with some thing does not make other happy. I now some people will not be happy with this but it the true anf true is not all was nice.
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ShawnHeaytherly Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2014
I actually agree with Karin. She sounds harsh, but that is because she is hurt about what Naruto did and that the person she loves is with someone else. I would call this a completely normal reaction.
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:iconladysolonna:
LadySolonna Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2014
Okay Karin. I respect you and I am a nice girl, but there is 1 thing you don't do: YOU DON'T GO AGAINST NARUHINA COMUNITI. the one which i am 2nd in comand. So do us all a favourite and SHUT THE FUCK UP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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:icondeadcobra:
DeadCobra Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2014
Like he needs more tragedy
Great
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Hotspot0626 Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2014
Man, Karin is such a bitch! :X
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:icontori5:
Tori5 Featured By Owner Edited Sep 19, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Can anybody murder Karin in the most painful way imaginable? Pretty please? Money isn't the issue, I'll throw in my entire budget along with my retirement savings. No price is too big to shut her ..... forever.
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:iconladysolonna:
LadySolonna Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2014
Lets se: i have susano and 9-tails combo
Then rashen shrunken - amaterasu. - Tail beast bomb combo...

Eny other combo you wish for? I can do whatever you ask for.
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deltahalo241 Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2014
Just drop her in an alternate dimension, preferably a desert and let her die slowly.
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:iconladysolonna:
LadySolonna Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2014
Jeah - i don't do slow deths. I like to be silent, but quick and dedly.
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:icondeltahalo241:
deltahalo241 Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2014
But then they don't feel any pain or suffering.
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:iconladysolonna:
LadySolonna Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2014
Hmm.... you have the point there.
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:icondeltahalo241:
deltahalo241 Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2014
Pain and Suffering is the only true way to off someone.
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:iconladysolonna:
LadySolonna Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2014
Hmm.... I can always try uzumaky maradge + 9-tails claught (4 tails form) + Sakura's straingh.

sounds painfule enaugh?
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:iconhotspot0626:
Hotspot0626 Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2014
:chainsaw::iconsaysplz: I'll do it for free!
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akamatt67 Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2014
Harsh, but true.
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:iconyaoitotoro:
YaoiTotoro Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:icondittoplz: ditto
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:iconrosetiger:
Rosetiger Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2014
Karin you bitch!
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:iconjupmod:
JuPMod Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2014
Ouch, ouch, ouch. Karin's words dug so deep there. She is making Naruto think about his relationship with Hinata. I just know this will lead to more heartaches. :(
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