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P.17 Cramps by Enock P.17 Cramps by Enock
So, here it is. Drama! I know, it's getting sad up in here, but it has to keep the story interesting and not boring mushy.....Nothing wrong with mushy, but not everything is rainbows. *pouts* Even though we wish it sometimes. This bump needs to go over to get to the better parts.

But don't worry, it'll get back to being strange funny half way in the comic, because I seriously can't wait for it too. =^.~=

Anyway, no page on Friday the 10th. There will be a page up on Friday 17! I'll see everyone there!~:heart: Peace out, I hope everyone has a good time, and not kill me with pitch forks and torches. T.T

~:heart: :kiss:

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Coupling
Couples: SasuSaku, NaruSaku, NaruHina, SaiNaru,SasuKarin,-------,--------,SasuNaru,-------. (<-it's like RPG, we just have to wait to unlock them) How they are unlock is when one of the characters are seriously in love with the other.

Warning:
This comic contains Blood, Adult Themes (R16), Swearing, Shounen-ai (Boy Love), Shoujo-ai (Girl Love) and Het (Straight).
This doujinshi will also contain things that the reader might not like, or disagree with later in the story. Things that will make people hate me for later -- and I don't really care if they do. It has to be done!
If this doujinshi doesn't hold your princess fancy, please don't leave a comment. Just leave. Thank you.
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:iconrikuuzumaki7:
RikuUzumaki7 Featured By Owner May 29, 2015
Looks like she's not ready to listen.
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:iconkaitlynlovehearts:
KaitlynLoveHearts Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2014  Student Interface Designer
FACK SUBSTITUTION JUTSU
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:iconrenatu500:
Renatu500 Featured By Owner Edited Dec 12, 2014
NARUTO YOUR DUMBASS!!!!
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:iconseven7lila:
Seven7Lila Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2014
Im a Naruhina fan. But in this story I hope Naruto stays with Sasuke.
...Still... thats mean, Naruto! How could you hurt Hinata lie that
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YukitoUchiha Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2014
Don't worry Enock!! Drama and angst are needed to make the story more appealing and interesting... ^_^

Oh my. Things have definitely gone worse. What is Naruto gonna do now? Follow Hinata? But she's nowhere to be seen. Go see Sasuke? Since she went to him before when in need. Gonna stay alone, soaking in the rain and sulk? Seems most likely.
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advanced69 Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2014
Damn naruko yah luck hinata isnt violent like your "crush" otherwise yah would say hello to the sky. Enock is Naruko dressed? is that body paint? cuz i dont know any sweater that shows the full contour of the breasts. otherwise good drama and good reaction representation of Hinata.
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:iconenock:
Enock Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
T.T I was starting to think that too with Naruto's clothing, but I am going to practice on sweater clothing that isn't paint on there. ^.~
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:iconadvanced69:
advanced69 Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2014
it will be tricky to do that with just lines, because her clothing is mostly black, i supose your only solution will be to play around with shadows and glows on the clothes, though it will be harder to make a full page because of the finer details, but hey, it will probably make you grow as an artist, so hang in there Enock ;)
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:iconenock:
Enock Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
*nod nod* It's a pain for sure! Thank you for the note. I can change it into that clothing, but I will still practice on how sweater works. Actually, maybe learn all clothing. Thank you for the critiquing. I'll better myself. *nod*
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DragonMan200 Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2014
god, Karin is a bitch, she can't be happy so nobody else can either can they????
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:iconlittlemsjester61:
LittleMsJester61 Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2014  Student Artist
thing have gotten interesting 
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:iconnightwolfx13:
nightwolfx13 Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2014
Enock why must you be so cruel with your amazing story that makes me sad ;-;
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:iconcrusader5643:
crusader5643 Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2014
Not sure if I'm really gelling with this interpretation of Karin. I mean I get it and all, but I think this is a little too over the top, even for her. If there is any moment with her not being a bitch, readers will only remember this scene because it stands out and ruins her nuances.
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:iconjaggib:
jaggib Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
yup in it deep
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:icondeadcobra:
DeadCobra Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2014
This is bad for Naruto
Nice comic
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:iconpairho:
PaiRho Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2014
That's clearly not forced enough. You need like a dozen dead puppies laying around. 
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:iconladysolonna:
LadySolonna Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2014
That is just sad. BUT WHY do I have the fealing Naruto will end up with Saske on the end?
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Draceer Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2014  Student General Artist
And she runs away from her problems like a little child rather than trying to confront Naruto head-on. A soldier ignoring her Hokage.
This break is definitely for the best.

A set of girls so clearly emotionally immature didn't belong together. Accept it, you rabid Naru/Hina lovers! ^_^

Now where shall Naruto turn to? The one person she's gone to so far, who was there when she needed him. Sasuke! :3
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:iconcrusader5643:
crusader5643 Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2014
Uhh, when was he ever there for him, at best he seemed begrudgingly obligated to help him and nothing else. Save only to humiliate him more. Not sure if we're reading the same comic.

Also, a soldier ignoring her Hokage, really? This isn't wartime, this is a relationship and personally I think her to be justified in this reaction. I don't see any childish actions here.
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deltahalo241 Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2014
It's going to be a wierd version of Yaoi but not.
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:iconstacy-chan4eva:
Stacy-chan4Eva Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
wow im like just super sad at this pointWaaaah!  but anyways have fun bein a brides maid :3!!!!!!!!!!
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:iconmattx125:
MattX125 Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2014  Student General Artist
THREE PAGES!  I feel spoiled!  THANK YOU, THANK YOU!!
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:iconmattx125:
MattX125 Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2014  Student General Artist
Loving this comic.
So sad... :'(
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:iconshe-who-thrist:
She-who-thrist Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2014
ummmm, you and your big mouth naruko
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:iconangelgozen:
AngelGozen Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2014
...that sucks
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:iconshawnheaytherly:
ShawnHeaytherly Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2014
These depressing dramatic moments are needed for a good story, so I don't mind. Have fun as a bridesmaid.
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:iconjadialuvsnaruhina:
jadialuvsnaruhina Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2014
Shiiit noooooooo
Dammit -cry
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:iconfuckersito:
FUCKERSITO Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2014
fuck :c
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:iconrosetiger:
Rosetiger Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2014
What's gonna happen now?!
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:iconshadowz596:
Shadowz596 Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
You done fucked up Naruto....
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:iconhotspot0626:
Hotspot0626 Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2014
I'm going to rip open this page and go kick Karin's ass! :iconsaiyanplz:
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:iconfire-inu-princess:
fire-inu-princess Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
can I join you in kicking Karin's ass?
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:iconhotspot0626:
Hotspot0626 Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2014
Yes! :dummy:

Achievement unlocked: Kill Dat Red-Haired Bitch!
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:iconfire-inu-princess:
fire-inu-princess Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
hell yeah!
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:iconrosetiger:
Rosetiger Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2014
Count me in, too!!! :angry: 
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:iconfire-inu-princess:
fire-inu-princess Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
WOOHOO
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:iconakamatt67:
akamatt67 Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2014
oh well, the only way to go now is forward.
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:iconallen-mikk:
allen-mikk Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2014
haAHahHAAHAHAAHA!!!
YES! THE GLORIOUS FEELS, I CAN TASTE THEM THROUGH THE MONITOR!
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:iconkillerkaiju1954:
KillerKaiju1954 Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2014
Karin sweety now look at what you did...you have an army of NaruHina fans out for blood now!
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:iconlawman09:
Lawman09 Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Now Naruto has nothing...
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:iconroger64:
Roger64 Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2014
Boy did I go from super happy for an update to super sad.
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