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HAPPY THANKSGIVING for USA. Please be careful on Black Friday. For everyone else, enjoy!

Actually, the size of these pages isn't so bad. Tell me if it's too small for you guys. I'll change it.

In other news, I find Kiba the most tragic character of them all.

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Coupling
Couples: SasuSaku, NaruSaku, NaruHina, SaiNaru,SasuKarin, KibaHina *new*,--------,SasuNaru,-------. (<-it's like RPG, we just have to wait to unlock them) How they are unlock is when one of the characters are seriously in love with the other.

Warning:
This comic contains Blood, Adult Themes (R16), Swearing, Shounen-ai (Boy Love), Shoujo-ai (Girl Love) and Het (Straight).
This doujinshi will also contain things that the reader might not like, or disagree with later in the story. Things that will make people hate me for later -- and I don't really care if they do. It has to be done!
If this doujinshi doesn't hold your princess fancy, please don't leave a comment. Just leave. Thank you.

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:iconcataclyptic:
Cataclyptic Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2018  Student Digital Artist
Oh sheez. The parallels. The love dodecagon steadily forming.
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RikuUzumaki7 Featured By Owner May 29, 2015
Looks like Kiba is now in Naruto's position. Naruto loved Sakura, but knows he'll never have her and let her go. The same is true for Kiba, even if he does love her, he can't have her because she loves Naruto.
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KaitlynLoveHearts Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2014  Student Interface Designer
wow two people feeling the same pain
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000123456789 Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2014
i  hate really to wait why are you doing this to me :( (Sad) 
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:iconcrusader5643:
crusader5643 Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2014
Really, Kiba? I dunno, when did he show interest in her during the cannon?
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crusader5643 Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2014
I guess the reason I took issue with the use of the term friendzone is that that has been a term that assholes have used to harass girls that do not have an interest in them. This has led to plenty of harassment online and offline. To see Kiba with the same attitude, not that you have portrayed him as such but if it goes that route, it would really not be good.
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Enock Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
 -_-U No offense, but the ending of Naruto comic did you think any of the characters that got marry show any interest in one of other before then? Like Sai and Ino? Beside one sense that Sai was being nice and all-of-the-sudden he's married to her and had kids? *shrugs*
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:iconcrusader5643:
crusader5643 Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2014
Eh, a lot can happen in 15 years. Kishimoto always ended up avoiding romance on purpose. I knew Naruto and Hinata would end up together, that was a given. Same with Sasuke and Sakura. As for Kiba and Hinata however, the relationship that was presented was one of mutual friendship. Anything that could suggest romance was just incorrect supposition on the readers end.
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Enock Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Yes, a lot can happen even in less than 3 years, but we had to jump straight to 15 years later.....which is a lot, I'd say. People couldn've gone out, break up, moved away, married, divorce, married again. Death in an accident, disease, cancer, mission, lost an arm, etc. Break ties, drama, change of heart, drugs, therapy, became homeless (since there's a city now), find out their sexuality, finding out who they are. The comic is Shounen jump comic after all, it wasn't supposed to be a shoujo comic in the first place. *blink*

But hey, what can I say. In my fancomic is a romance comedy which has Naruto already Hokage, Neji is still alive and Sasuke is at home picking on Naruto. So...in this comic it's going to be 100% wrong from the real manga. Real Kiba has mutual friendship with Hinata. But my Kiba doesn't have to stay silent and not feel anything about it. I have a hard time believing none of the other guys didn't fall in love with Hinata. Fanboys have loved Hinata since she came along. If a lot of fanboys can fall in loved her that much. Then why can't guys like Kiba or Shino can? Are they blind, or stupid not to have thoughts/feelings about Hinata? Are they not allow to be attract to her? Kiba already has a sister. He knows what a sister feels like. He doesn't need another one (talk about sad, sad guy if he made Hinata another sister.) Is Hinata "automatically" off limits by everyone beside Naruto, because her heart say so, her fans say so? Kiba isn't going to be a lifeless, heartless push-to-the side guy just because he isn't special super hero like Naruto. That's what I want to show. *nod nod* I want Kiba more related to guys that are trap in friendzones. This Naruto fancomic is different universe now. *blink*
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crusader5643 Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2014
Actually, I take issue with your assessment of the pairing results. Your saying none of them make sense and shouldn't have been attempted in the first place because it wasn't shoujo? That's kind of narrow minded to say shounen can't broach topics of love.
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Enock Featured By Owner Edited Dec 10, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Yes, that's my bad, I did place that up in the warnings longgg longg time ago, because I've been getting request from different kinds of shippers wanting me to add in their couples to the story. At the time, I didn't know how to word it, maybe popular couples? *thinks* I had to place something to tell these different shippers I can't fit them all in story. Or I'll be writing this comic forever. X.x  So yes, it is very narrow minded of me to have worded that way when it contradicts to what I'm saying. I'll change it to popular pairings? What do you think?

Wait....maybe I am looking like an ass right now....*thinks* I took that part of the warning....*thinks* Is it written somewhere that I said it make sense? *trying to remember*....where was it....mmmmm

I didn't say Shounen can't have romance. Heck, it won't be a rich story, right? But It will not cripple the plot is what I'm saying *blinks* I just don't think romance should weight the plot line more than a shoujo does. Shoujo is all about the main character's love for each other, while other bg characters are...*thinks* ...an achievement to over come? I can't remember that word. X.x Shounen has all about achievement for characters all around, his goal, his weakness, friends he love, his love etc. That even bg characters can help out too, have goals of their own.

Why Kishi ending characters don't make sense to me while I pull Kiba out of my ass in mine is...because I've read that 50% of the time people will fall in love with the people they work with, meeting through friends/family, coming to the same public places. Mostly interacting with the same, comfortable faces. If Kishi has to write the whole 15 years explaining how everyone got together and how it make sense to him. That's fine. I don't think he needs 15 years to do it, though. I just don't think it make sense to me everyone had sex the same time, and had children/birthdays at the same time.  He doesn't have to do heavy romance to explain how Choji and .....what's her hot face's name interact. How? Did they have mission? Was it not peaceful enough that they had to go on mission together? Did they work well with each other? Did she piss Choji off by calling him fat? How long did it take for them to interact with each other before she move to Konoha? How many mission did they go together? Did they go to the same restaurants/bars a lot of times knowing each other? Is she a cook? Why did Ino pick Sai over Sasuke? Why did Karin not fight for her Sasuke? Did she die from an awful cancer or moved away. Kinda thing? Is baby boom really the only answer to pop babies at the end at the same? T.T

Okay....T.T did I sound enough like an ass or do you still want to devour me? Y.Y Or am just I looking like a plan ass right now?
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crusader5643 Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2014
You make a very good point, very well explained. Although maybe I would use another term than friendzone since a lot of women have been harassed with that term.
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Enock Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks. I was scared it sounded harsh or something. T.T Sorry if it did. Oh *thinks* What do you think another term for Friendzone should be call? *curious* I like to keep that in mind.
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jk-anime Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2014  Hobbyist
only 2 shipping names left!! OwO
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Crysta19 Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Naruto you Need to go find Hinata. Apologies for what you said and Then tell her that Kiba is really the one she should be with. It will be heard, but you want her to be happy right?? And all your Other friends as well. You will find someone Naruto, and that someone will come when you need them the most
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Artificer-Urza Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2014
"I want my beloved to be happy." Or some sappy trope like that. At least he's not thinking "If I can't have her, no one can!"
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gamergirl32 Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2014
So it goes Kiba-> Hinata-> Naruto-> Sakura<->Sasuke. That is intense.
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troth5 Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2014
Awe, poor Kiba. Naruto should totally play matchmaker for Kiba and Hinata!
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YukitoUchiha Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2014
On second thought the rain maleš the scene more sad and miserable ^_^"

I feel Sorry for Kiba. If he loves Hinata and being in the same team knows how Hinata has felt for Naruto for so long. And still does.
I hope everything turns out alright for everyone:(
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Crazymarimo Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2014
I hope it all ends nicely. SHIPS THEM ALREADY
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:iconxaae:
Xaae Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
OHHHHHHHHHHHHH
SNAP
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:icondeadcobra:
DeadCobra Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2014
Funny
Great
All these emotional problems that people haw are so stupid
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Draceer Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2014  Student General Artist
Time to play mtachmaker, Naru!
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Hotspot0626 Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2014
Man, everyone is feeling bad this rainy day!
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deltahalo241 Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2014
Everyones eating Turkey on thanksgiving and here I am with a chicken sandwich.
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:iconmaonekochan:
MaonekoChan Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2014
I have neither turkey nor chicken sandwich cuz germany be like no thanksgiving thank you. 
Wo don't celebrate it o:
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:icondeltahalo241:
deltahalo241 Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2014
I don't know if we celebrate it in England but everyone was talking about it and I kind of felt left out.
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:iconmaonekochan:
MaonekoChan Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2014
know that feel bro
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:icondeltahalo241:
deltahalo241 Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2014
We should start a cult.
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:iconmaonekochan:
MaonekoChan Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2014
Yes. The cult of the people who don't celebrate thanksgiving.
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:icondeltahalo241:
deltahalo241 Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2014
We'll spread it throughout the world!
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:iconmaonekochan:
MaonekoChan Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2014
Yes! People everywhere (not in america, of course) will join!
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PerryWhite Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2014
KibaHina! Chevron 7 encoded.
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:iconfighting-dreamers-94:
going to fucking cry now
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:iconlawman09:
Lawman09 Featured By Owner Edited Nov 28, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Oh God... you're going to demean Kiba's character? I'm sorry but I've seen his character ruined enough by people trying to give him feelings for Hinata... :no:

And you always seem to do this sort of thing around holidays or happy occasions...
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:iconenock:
Enock Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Don't worry. I am going to demean every character in here until the end.
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Lawman09 Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Oh, you~ =P

And why does a sad plotline always seem to happen around the holidays or other happy occasions? Are you targeting our happiness? *suspicious glare*
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:iconenock:
Enock Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
LOL!! No! I don't even know why that happens! It's like the holidays sneaks in right when the sad parts happen!

Holiday: "Hey, hey, Enock....Enock....guess who's coming around the mountain when he comes~!"

Enock: "....NO! STAY, F-OFF! I don't need you right now Holiday! I already have too much on my plate!"

Holiday *comes in like a horror movie* "I am going to make it sad for everyone!"

Enock: "NOOOOOO!"
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:iconlawman09:
Lawman09 Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
You mean like a wrecking ball? =P
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:iconenock:
Enock Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Yeah. totally *bleh* X.x
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:iconlawman09:
Lawman09 Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Heh, alright. I've messed you enough. :)
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ShawnHeaytherly Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2014
Such a sad part of the comic... still, sadness is a key element in the story, so I don't mind. Happy Thanksgiving (though I'm pretty sure Canada celebrates Thanksgiving in a different month).
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Enock Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Yup, we had our thanksgiving in Oct 13. I don't know why Canada and the US have different dates on it. Especially for families that live across the border from each other and have to go to two different thanksgiving. :c
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Mystic-Wolf-Of-Snow Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
ohhh kiba :cry:
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LadySolonna Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2014
Auch. Kiba is gonna cry
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