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The end or is it? by Enock The end or is it? by Enock
Edited: That''s the end! I hope you guys like it. I pour my feelings into it. like I said if you want to repeat a story, there is another way to do it. So, tell me what you guys think. I am open to hear any thoughts. I don't mind to answer your (me =_= geez brain) questions. She would've become a badass.


Speical (not done) gift:The world Haruto goes into
Perv: Haruto P.37

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overload53 Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2016
As she is being consumed by the monster its insides aren't as hostile as one would think, but only those who have something to live for can survive its hazardous bowels. Planets and organisms slowly being digested as they murge to form one massive planet in the recesses of the creatures' gullet. There, Haruto will find her heart once more as she fights from the inside out in the belly of the beast.
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artboy329 Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Don't let it end like that it has to be more.
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shelbythehegdehog112 Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2015
Pleaseeeee continue this story, I love it sooooo much, especially how you draw the characters :D
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1Fanfanatick Featured By Owner May 29, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
dat ending! Loved it! It's so amazing and I do hope that you give us just a little more. But in the end I'm happy X D
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good lord that is depressing
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LexieTheBloodPixie Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2015
Omg :O_o:
Thats all i can really say...
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Zarita-chan Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
WHAT THE HELL?!
I dont know, i guess i love you.

love the comic.
but i want more!
:D
your art its amazing! 
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Eye-of-the-goddess Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
wow this comic is amazing, I'm impressed, its so original!!! kinda sad that Naruto had to die ;_; but I guess its all for the story so I'll have to deal. And aside from their universe getting destroyed I think this is an even better ending to Naruto then the original ending your more in depth about what happened after the war and how people actually achieved their peace instead of just saying they did... and I like how everyone of rookie nine matured realistically and respectively , good job I cant wait to see what you do next Akari Akazaki (Good Job) [V3] 
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hmfan24 Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Oh, no, that wasn't a happy ending. It was pretty swell though. I liked it.
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Killercloud Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2015
Much awesome, such wow. Need more!
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jaggib Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2015  Student Traditional Artist
it was wonderful very interesting 
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Bestlizard Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2015
Very interesting indeed. I like it. More details and it will be heck of a journey!

Plus I believe Haruko will have awesome powers since she's both Hyuuga and Uchiha at the same time. I wanna see what you have in mind.
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lordjohnstang Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2015
Wow, I mean WWW000000WWW!!!!!!!! 

That was the most intense reading I done in a long time.  And I enjoyed every word.  Thanks. 

You are without doubt extremely talented.  Now I am glad you stopped working on 'Period'.  I look forward to the next installment. 

Thanks again,

John
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PenumbraChey Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
That was quite the journey there...and you say it's not over yet. Wow!
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Deidarakitty Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
That was really well done! It was very sad, but it was still good. You had a great idea with this one :thumbsup:
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Crysta19 Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
I love this can't wait for more
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artists-block-Bgone Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
All very interesting!  A new story, new outcome, new character.  I like it, it must have taken a massive amount of effort, props to you for that!  Taking a tangent like this to do something different was a good gamble on your part.
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Seven7Lila Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2015
Interesting indeed
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troth5 Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2015
Very interesting! I would be interested in knowing more. 
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Elldo Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2015
It was really cool! ^^
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codename-shadowfox Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2015
It looks somewhat interesting, would I read the continuation though? Probably not. I'd still say that you should go for it if you really want to do this story however.
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WeirdAyako Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2015
OMG!! This comic is awesome!!! I may even say that I love it even more than Period 0.0!! I so wanna know what will happen next!! >< And the main character is cute and badass at the same time!! It's whoa! *.* I can't even describe my feelings now!! Pleeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaase moooooooooore TT_TT!!! I wanna knooooooooooooow ><

PS: Thanks for this wonderful story that has just brighten my day *-*
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JuPMod Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2015
Wow. Now that was one very dark and sad story. Everything was going great until a planet-eating monster appears and just devours the planet. I felt sorry for Haruto given she was the only survivor, yet by the end, I felt sad for her too give she blindly went into the monster's den and gotten kill herself. :(

Anyway, an interesting AU you made here, Enock, where Naruto dies and things are different without him alive. Nice job. :)
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BrownieRaider Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2015  Student Traditional Artist
That ending makes me want more, what happened?!
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ProfessM Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2015  Hobbyist Photographer
WELL THAT WAS DARK! I love it! More parallel universes pleases! The Road to Ninja movie almost got me to get back into the official Naruto stuff. This is how it should be done. Keep up the great work. Though for some reasons this makes me want to rewatch a few key eps of Code Geass, no idea why!
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Animaid101 Featured By Owner Edited Jan 21, 2015
OMG, Enock, this was by far the most stunning, overwhelming and amazing wake-up surprise I ever had when looking on dA! :squee:
How were you even able to draw 39 pages in a row?  Even when you did this time by time... I can't even imagine how you did this.

I already knew that you are blessed with fantasy by watching your doujinshi Period, but this is... epic, going far beyond everything I could imagine to be put in a doujinshi. Though the concept of mixing parallel worlds isn't new in the comic scene, you brought it to another level. I bet Kishimoto bites his butt when he has a look on your doujinshi. :XD:
I love your story and I sincerely hope it is NOT the end yet! I hope it's just the beginning of an outstanding doujinshi.

Though the concept of Naruto dying to save his best friend was very sad, it felt so genuine, cause it would have been something he had done without hesitation. I always feared canon to end like this, with Naruto dead, cause, let's be honest, heroes are usually people who died for something or someone. "Heroes can be found on the graveyard" that's a saying which is true, I guess.
I like my heroes to be alive and overcome everything, yet I love your doujinshi. I understand that the sad beginning was important for the development of the story. SasuHina really seemed logical to happen by this tragedy and I love it how Sasuke changed to the better by Hinata's care and company. Hinata changed too, cause she had to take care of Sasuke. That's a marvelous idea. Finally she developed, like it would be in real life, everyone did.

I was so shocked by the turn of events when Haruto's world was destroyed. Everyone, her cute baby brother and parents included, were dead. She being the only survivor, this must have felt devastating for her (like you described it). Hell, I felt devastated!

This guy, Irenot, from the other world, who tried to fight the world eating monster, looks almost like this Otsutsuki-guy in the movie. Just that in your version he has eyes and is a good guy. :D

I really feel excited about your new idea and I hope to see the next page and chapter. Also thank you so much for your decision to go on with "Period"! You're the best! :hug: :heart:
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thevampman24 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2015
Holy shit
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ShawnHeaytherly Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2015
Damn you Enock! Why do you keep making comics I want more of!?

In all seriousness, this was an amazing prolouge/preview. If you decide to make more, I will happily read more.

As for questions, will this be the only other world Haruto visits, or will she see many possible universes? Just wondering if we might see her reaction to what happened in canon, some clichés in fanfics, maybe even Naruto: Period.
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Enock Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2015  Professional Digital Artist
She will be in Naruto Menopause (once I freakin kill this idiotic feeling I'm having, but reading the comments of you fans have a great help, but most of you guys are right. I have to deal with it on my own. X.x grrr), but her friends will be in Period. We get to see them.

The world she went into IS the Canon world. If I write that one out. I'm actually scared of the backlash I'll get for it, but canon!Sasuke trains her and gets to her first lab to destroy. X.x After that world next world she goes into is NaruSaku world where she gets her father's sword and headgear from Naruto. Shinachiku, (Narusaku's son) goes with her.

Point of Haruto, is that every world is great no matter what the couple is, or the children in it. Fanfic, canon, non-canon, doesn't matter. ^.^
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ShawnHeaytherly Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2015
Sounds great! I'd love to see her reaction to all the other versions (calling it now, she doesn't realize who Naruto is when she meets "her" in Naruto Menopause and they get into an argument).

As for your feeling, no worries Enock. Whatever you decide, I'm sure it'll be work out. Worst case scenario, I can just commission you to draw Naruto as a girl again. heheh

Stay positive; you're way too awesome to be worried.
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Anime-Geek-Girl32 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
is there going to be more?
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Enock Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2015  Professional Digital Artist
I'm not too sure yet...
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Anime-Geek-Girl32 Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
oh ok
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Mystic-Wolf-Of-Snow Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This was amazing, i loved every moment of it ^^
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Roger64 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2015
Oooh so torn! I'd love to see more of this world you made buuuut...not at the possible cost of Period. Why can't there be three Enocks? One to deal with life and one for each comic.
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Shadowz596 Featured By Owner Edited Jan 20, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow. Quite a dark and gritty tale. Not usually a fan of SasuHina, but it wasn't half bad. Good work.
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historianGirl Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2015   General Artist
Wow, what a story.
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akamatt67 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2015
This is a good story, please continue.
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Hotspot0626 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2015
Amazing! There must be more please! :D The story of Haruto must be told!
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HaleyATheGreat Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
More!
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XxPurpleHedgieXx Featured By Owner Edited Jan 20, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
This was...wow. So deep. I felt all of the feelings in this. The anger, the sadness everything, i almost cried, but the end is what definitely got me
Amazing job!
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ZGStudios Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2015  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
This was an amazing comic! And you;ve left me yearning for more! I look forward to seeing more of your work!
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